Please could you change the title of this blog to A2, and use proper English with capital letters.
You have made a good start to your functional specification, but there is a few things that need to be improved.
You shouldn't say in your purpose that you will try to do things. By this point you should know exactly the content of your project and be able to say this will be included.
Your information paragraph needs to be more specific. You mention some of the content of the videos, forehand, backhand etc, but then say that some more will be included. You should be specific, exactly what will be included.
Please could you change the title of this blog to A2, and use proper English with capital letters.
ReplyDeleteYou have made a good start to your functional specification, but there is a few things that need to be improved.
You shouldn't say in your purpose that you will try to do things. By this point you should know exactly the content of your project and be able to say this will be included.
Your information paragraph needs to be more specific. You mention some of the content of the videos, forehand, backhand etc, but then say that some more will be included. You should be specific, exactly what will be included.